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Do you remember...
our times in the woods?
the things we discovered?
the way we explored each other?

Do you remember...
the way you said happy birthday?
the cries when it started to hurt?
how you said I'd be yours?

Do you remember...
the fights over silly things?
the unspoken "I love you"?
my loyalty?

Do you remember....
the night you left?
our last phone call?
my broken heart?

Do you remember...
me?
This was written during one of my studyhalls. Its a love poem about a broken heart simple right? it was impossible to come up with
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maddigurl572 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011
The question should really be, do you care?
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malkey Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It feels peculiar that on a website devoted to words I can't seem to find any to describe how much I love this poem, the repetion, the emotion. They say eyes are the window to your soul, I would argue this poem, despite your difficulty in writting this, has opening you out wide.
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) It feels good to know that someone can't find words to describe one of my poems so thank you for that.
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RockedByReality Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is great I love it :love:. Abandonment can be hurtful, but everyone feels it, we all share the pain.
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
the pain is not only in one person its shared to make a difference :heart:
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RockedByReality Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yepp, and it can even help a lot of us.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful <3
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) :heart:
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome c:
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The-World-Is-Bored Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010
I love it
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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eveningstarzz Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
I like how everything melted into the last line! Nice ;D
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :D
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eveningstarzz Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
you're welcome ^__^!
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njnaz765 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Professional Artist
I believe we've al felt this way at one point in our lives. You really capture the haunting feeling of abandonment.
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PowerPuffPastry Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010
"Haunting feeling of abandonment" fits so well with this.
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, it does
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
it really is a haunting feeling, abandonment, we feel it every day but its hard to really describe in words.
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Xerolien Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:happycry:
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truecolor101 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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